Zelda and Kotaro Fuma

So my friend and I are writing this crossover FanFiction. The crosses are:
Super Smash Bros Brawl X The Legend Of Zelda: Majora's Mask X TLOZ: Twilight Princess X TLOZ Skyward Sword X Shall We Date?: NinjaLove.
We kind of did a bit of cross-coupling too...like:
Zelda x Kotaro x Midna (love triangle)
Marth x Girahim (Giramarth!) (not likely to continue in story)
Samus x ? (need friend's approval first)

So I decided to draw, in pencil, a scene from it. The characters are Zelda and Kotaro, and Zelda's supposed to have given herself to save Midna after a Brawl in which the three had to fight...it's really complicated. Just enjoy the picture and our tiny prologue (in Kotaro 1st person):

As I stand here, waiting for the deciding brawl to begin, I wonder if I have made the right choice. Even if I have… will it make everyone happy?
Two princesses. One ninja protector. Three hearts. Only two can have each other. I must chose, but, as a protector, it is my duty not to. It is against the Ninja Code: Never fight those you protect, and only fight when it is necessary. It is because of this that I cannot make my choice… or can I?

There would be more of one to follow with the real narrator's introductions of characters and Smash Manor and the rules and everything. Yes, the narrator is a 1st person narrator, a see-all 3rd person narration at times, though. It's interesting. Sometimes there are chapters that are only the narrator speaking. It's going to be so good!!!